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Thursday 10 March 2011

Class Feedback for the Rough Cut

EDITING


"Good use of match on action and transitions. Quick paced editing towards the end, well placed and continuous"


SOUND


"A lot of diagetic sound at the beginning, maybe some music as he's getting ready and biking to show emotion and characters feelings at the time..." 


We had a soundtrack but we couldn't use it, so a new soundtrack is being made now, and will defiantly be included in the final video. 


"...Production sound is appropriate to logo"


CAMERAWORK


"Camerawork was good! lots of cool shots, seemed to have experimented with them a lot. Good use of low angle shots and detailed shots."


MISE-EN-SCENE


"Lighting was appropriate because it was naturalistic. Props = bike + lock + alarm clock = Standard every day use. Costumes were daily wear, makes it more interesting? not suspecting anything"


TITLES


"Inventive titles on parts of the house, this was very effective. Plain titles with black background interrupted some parts."


THRILLER CONVENTIONS


- Protagonist and Antagonist becomes clear straight away. 


- A lot of questions asked but not many answers 


- Storyline is clear.


- The narrative is carried by ordinary situations where extra ordinary things happen. 

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